This is your opportunity to demonstrate your understanding revising by providing examples from your informative draft where you have improved on the topics of counterclaims, sufficient evidence, relationships, persuasive techniques.

What you will do for each question is...

Copy and paste a section of your original text where you can improve on the topic of the question
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In a different color font, paste in the edited version of that text.
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Add a 1 sentence comment about why the edited version is better.

Example of Counterclaim:

The United States has a lot in common with Russia.

While some might think that Russia is the extreme opposite of the United States, they actually have a lot in common.

The edited version is better because I make it clear that there is a common stereotype that many reader might associate with. They would immediately scoff at my argument without acknowledging their position.